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Zehya
The conflict starts out slover than in Atta's entry, but I think it is built up perfectly. The entry makes me want to see more of the two. The payoff in Atta's entry is bittersweet and nice, but I prefer the tension and intrigue in Zehya's entry. My X key hurts.

Hemma
Hemma you crazy man. That boy needs help I tell you what.

Derrick & Geoffry
The police humor just lands for me.

Houndclops
The humor and action is great, I think both contestants have a more balanced presence in this entry too.

Smoke
I love Smoke and the introspection by 2-3-A is sweet.

Melody Valentine
The action is slick and both contestants are great fun here.

Toabyak
Adel's entry is longer but I think Toabyak's entry manages to use the characters better. It's short and sweet.

Berno
The art is just plain beautiful. Both entries have great characterization, the Time Warrior's a bastard in both and Berno's crass, although I like the goofier side of him in his entry.

Fishimote
The fish learning to fly is just glorious

I hope I didn't forgor anyone