>>7676015
>>7676010
I've written fully written out the first chapter, and have a rough draft of the rest of the story (I have a useless government job where I do 2 hours of IT work and then 6 hours of nothing), with a middle section I'm kind of iffy on. I might be adding too much fluff, and the arts not good, but some people I've shown some of the opening too, seem to like it, so we'll see once I'm done.

https://imgur.com/a/foGMvEy

Posted the first 33 WIP pages above abit ago, and I might have taken too long to set things up, especially cause I've paced it more like a movie.

Picrel is the girl I'm setting up to kill (and then revive in the last page as basically a ghoul), I wanted to set up the key characters before starting the main plot. As of right now, I've gotten them in a kangaroo crash right in front of the pier in the opening page, and its gonna go down in a pretty predictable way,

magic crocodile, mirror realm, magic artifacts. MKULTRA like experiments, zombifying black goo, an autistic giantess, yada yada yada, you've probably heard it all before.

Anyway if it turns out shit, at least I got practice in