didn't get any feedback on this in begint, so i figured maybe repost here and see if anyone's got anything glaring to point out
most of all i'm worried about the graphical read rather than detailing out the fingers or the exact mechanics of the belt buckles, so i'd appreciate that more, but i'll take anything you've got at all

>>7601486
the biggest issue here is IMO composition, the face is fixable and whatnot, and you've polished it nice, but it reads poorly, and there's no actual focal points in the image or a good hint as to what it's trying to say

>>7600200
aside from the fact that the face shape is slightly off (weirdly dented cheek/bone on her left, top of nose weirdly bulbous, and missing left nostril and weird philtrum) and that the shadows are too yellow/not red enough, you seem to have a problem with edge control: some of the soft transitions are much harder than in the ref (say the area between her right eyesocket and the nose bridge, or right cheekbone transitioning into the cheek), whereas some hard edges are much softer (such as the shadow from her nose onto her cheek)