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7/6/2025, 3:10:38 AM
>>714619682
tried to rewrite this
>King Quercus looked upon what had once been the city of Krawveld.
>Nothing remained of the orcish capital but rubble and ash. The screams of its army had long since given way to silence, and even the flames had become embers, snuffed out under the boots of the advancing elvish troops.
>King Quercus looked upon all this, and for the first time in three years, he smiled.
please critique, i'm not a writer
tried to rewrite this
>King Quercus looked upon what had once been the city of Krawveld.
>Nothing remained of the orcish capital but rubble and ash. The screams of its army had long since given way to silence, and even the flames had become embers, snuffed out under the boots of the advancing elvish troops.
>King Quercus looked upon all this, and for the first time in three years, he smiled.
please critique, i'm not a writer
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