>>534070827
He thinks he's writing the new Gunnm / Battle Angel Alita.

If you read it you'd see where a lot of his flaws as a writer come.
>power wanking (the SF one, not the martial arts "wow he's so strong!" one)
>Bra lite MC (except good)
>SF

He tried to translate all of this into Dragon Ball because it had the Freeza arc for aliens and some tech with Gero, but it obviously failed.