>>4449147
Seems kino to me
>>4449191
Thanks a lot! Yeah I think I've improved quite a bit in the almost 3 years since I started writing this, so I recently took the time and rewrote the first 5 chapters almost entirely, and did a lot of other minor edit of the first arc, so I'm really happy to know it was worth it! Feel free to reach out to me again if there is more improvement needed, or just to talk about scenes or characters you like haha~