A thread to discuss any personal yuri creations you're currently working on or have ideas for, and to get feedback and advice from other anons. Tell us what you're making!

This includes but is not limited to:
>yuri stories (note that fanfiction has it's own dedicated thread)
>yuri video games
>yuri comics
>yuri card games
>yuri 3D modeling and/or printing
>yuri graffiti
>yuri food
>using deep learning to construct two sentient female AI and setting them up on a blind date

Note that all the normal board rules still apply, e.g. no hetshit, etc.

>>4446790 (OP)
I'm continuing (writing, deleting, writing, deleting) my planned series about two lesbian witches (one gentry, one peasantry) exploring the countryside to explore and document various magic-related stuff like monsters, phenomena, and folklore. General inspiration for tone and content is The Witcher, but more about studying than killing. The current plan is for it to be a series of connected short stories that gradually build an over arching plotline.

>>4446824
Starting out with episodic stories is smart because then you can quit any time before comitting to the full narrative.

>>4446824
Sounds neat.

>>4446824
Yennaia inspired?

>>4446824
Love it. I love the witcher and travel stories

>>4445381
>>4445460
Thanks a lot! I'm so glad you're enjoying it!

found a brush called flat and its quite nice with the way it adds shade but im not confident how ill be able to transfer all that details when i have to color in. the sketching didnt take long so its something i could see myself using it for webcomics.

>>4446790 (OP)
But she's driving electric? What full tank?

>>4444390
Just make them monsters or robots

>>4448933
>nice with the way it adds shade but im not confident how ill be able to transfer all that details when i have to color in
Do you mean you are getting nice values in your sketch but then are worried about being able to duplicate that with a different brush when painting over it? You could always just do value entirely without the color and then glaze the color on top in some sort of blending mode like multiply or (if you are a masochist) doing every individual colored region as a gradient map.

Let me say that I draw very badly and I don't exactly write better. Oh, and I am not unaware about this being cliche and all.
So, my idea is simple. Two orphan girls, 15 and 17, attend the same school and notice both have meme-gigantic boobs. I mean, no one comes close at school, even teachers. They are very alike and decide to investigate where they come from, and find out that they are sisters. I don't really know how to make this, I am certain the older sister lives alone but I don't know how to organically make them team-up besides "Oppai rangers, assemble!". Plus I want it to happen in japan due autism but I don't know about adoption laws in glorious nihon-go.
Anyway, the next step would be having the younger sibling moving out with the other, and that's where things get freaky, I am thinking about both girls being very ladylike but with different hobbies (Mahjong, cosplay, the stuff), but since they haven't really grown up together they haven't developed the Westermarck effect, and they are in this conjuncture about really being into each other but knowing it's taboo, but on the other hand are they really sisters just because genetics say so? I was planning on adding trauma about past relationships and perhaps more characters like a friend of the youngest or a room mate of the eldest, but I don't think I have the ability to flesh out those characters without losing myself into them.
And after that I don't know. Maybe the mother suddenly is alive and they find her, and has a good reason for having left them, and they get along but now they can't tell their mother that they are girlfriends instead of sisters. Obviously the mom has even bigger breasts because, genetics, and pregnancy, and milk, and stuff. I was thinking maybe adding an aunt and the girls finding out the mom has the same relationship with the aunt, only that even more twisted because they actually grew up together. Idk.
So yeah, I am a mess. A horny mess at that.

>>4449147
This is some real Tae-chan and Jimiko shit.that's a good thing.

>>4448694
I checked out your story back when it was new but as I recall I dropped it due to grammar and just not reading very nicely. 9 chapters in now and it looks a lot better than I remember, did you do a lot of editing?

Keep up the good work anyway, very nice so far.

>>4449147
Seems kino to me
>>4449191
Thanks a lot! Yeah I think I've improved quite a bit in the almost 3 years since I started writing this, so I recently took the time and rewrote the first 5 chapters almost entirely, and did a lot of other minor edit of the first arc, so I'm really happy to know it was worth it! Feel free to reach out to me again if there is more improvement needed, or just to talk about scenes or characters you like haha~

>>4448970

>>4449322
How can we see their butts through the seats?

gonna draw naked women to celebrate when i get 20 followers on my webcomic.c 5 more to go :D

>>4449630
No need to be modest anon, link it!

>>4449674
i havent made the naked female though

>>4449679
Well then draw it and THEN post the webcomic link.

I am available for consulting and troubleshooting services for any other PYPers, only $25 an hour.

>>4449682
whats PYP?

>>4449692
The title of the thread.

Is it a good idea to have the main couple exist just to set the story, but focus on and develop the side couples instead? whenever I watch any show, i always enjoy watching the side characters more than the main characters.

>>4449765
>but focus on and develop the side couples instead
That's just making them the main couple.

>>4449765
The way I like to do it is have the side could actually be side couples. The development of their relationship is shown through the perspective of the main character. The reader might not get the full picture of their relationship, and indeed, the relationship of the side could maybe not even be completely codified through the course of the main story, but that's okay because it's not their story. They exist as their own story that is taking place separately but simultaneously with the main couple.

>>4449765
What if you make it so that the side couple has a side couple?

I'ma self-taught artist and I'm trying to learn exactly to shade the warmth shading of a body. Does anyone got any advice or should I go to the drawthread? ( i just kinda wanna know what tool do i use, and how to do it.)

>>4449909
>warmth shading of a body
Can't figure out what you mean with this anon

>>4449912
You know how you don't just use one color for the entire body, but you gotta incorporate some redness to show warmth, and then other shadings depending on the light source? Like all of the different shades on this girl's body.

>>4449913
>Airbrush the ero parts (tip of boob, asscheek, toes fingers, knees, heel). The same shade as the face's blush
>Lightly apply a darker shade on the edges of the skin
I don't know what's this for but JP anime artists do this. It adds a 3d feel I guess
>Color the line art

If you're drawing skin touching try erasing the lineart on the points of contact

>>4449975
>I don't know what's this for
It's because the distribution and visibility of blood is not even throughout the body. There are places with more or fewer blood vessels, and places where the skin/fat obscures those vessels more or less. This creates places where the skin is more pink or less pink (the cheeks, fingertips, breasts, etc) . There are also places where the skin tends to be more blue/cool and places where it tends to be more yellow.

im thinking of making racist women my leitmotif for all my works, I'm sure most readers wont like this but I want it.

>>4450046
Just write historical fiction and nobody will mind it.

>>4450051
Its based in East Asia and makes fun of koreans.
Its uploaded on webtoon too