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6/4/2025, 6:54:49 PM
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>Still sad that the author of Gynophobia nuked his story.
Agreed. I still feel kind of bad for being the straw that broke that camel's back.
However, here's something new in the "stallion-TF with a traumatic backstory transported to RGRE" world:
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/578451/husbando
The author, Storymaker, ran out of genre tags, so "human" escaped my usual filter and this showed up in my search. Still, I have to grudgingly admit it's merely poorly written.
So far we have 1 chapter, anon (Jack) is a musclebound Chad whose parents used to fight and maybe beat him. He liked vinyl before it was cool and turns down the swarm of ladies who approach him because of all of his childhood feelings. Then Twilight teleports him to Equestria to be her husband, where he turns into, *sigh*, a male alicorn. There's a static explaining-things scene and then he's sent to his room where he sings a sad song -with lyrics in the text I am not fucking kidding- and then goes to bed.
BUT, the RGRE is shaping up. This author actually cares to lean into the dark tag a teensy bit. First off, and most enticingly, as Twilight explains that his soul has been made Equestrian and he's stuck here permanently, she also clarifies the summoning spell causes some kind of soul-bonding. The ramifications have yet to be made totally clear, but a great deal of possession and ownership is voiced about it. Delicious, I've really been hoping for some soul-bond stuff. There's some further implication that summoning males from other dimensions as war grooms is common, another fantastic idea I've been thinking we've lacked.
Starlight shows up to make some lewd comments about the main character, Twilight does some mate guarding, invades his personal space for some lewd nuzzling, makes it clear she owns him, all very good. Finally, she changes his name and then gives him a room next to hers with a connecting door. Best of all, he dislikes all of this.
I'm anxious about him being an alicorn. Obviously stallicorns violate something sacred about the show in general, but moreover setting up a future equalization in power between them is a huge red flag that this story may culminate in some gay, historically bankrupt re-litigation of a gender war rebellion or whatever. Likewise if the course of his resistance to Twilight becomes, in a narrative sense, more about humiliating her than about failure then I'll probably stop reading.
Otherwise, the author's writing is passable, although frequent grammatical issues in the comment replies make me concerned. He has a knack for that kind of terrible dramatic comparison that only someone truly lacking in imagination can accomplish, and an urgency about making said comparisons for every single thing he describes.
>"Those eyes—impossibly blue, like the sky had given him a piece of itself and told him to go cause problems—drifted down to the street."
I spit.
Will monitor this one.
>Still sad that the author of Gynophobia nuked his story.
Agreed. I still feel kind of bad for being the straw that broke that camel's back.
However, here's something new in the "stallion-TF with a traumatic backstory transported to RGRE" world:
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/578451/husbando
The author, Storymaker, ran out of genre tags, so "human" escaped my usual filter and this showed up in my search. Still, I have to grudgingly admit it's merely poorly written.
So far we have 1 chapter, anon (Jack) is a musclebound Chad whose parents used to fight and maybe beat him. He liked vinyl before it was cool and turns down the swarm of ladies who approach him because of all of his childhood feelings. Then Twilight teleports him to Equestria to be her husband, where he turns into, *sigh*, a male alicorn. There's a static explaining-things scene and then he's sent to his room where he sings a sad song -with lyrics in the text I am not fucking kidding- and then goes to bed.
BUT, the RGRE is shaping up. This author actually cares to lean into the dark tag a teensy bit. First off, and most enticingly, as Twilight explains that his soul has been made Equestrian and he's stuck here permanently, she also clarifies the summoning spell causes some kind of soul-bonding. The ramifications have yet to be made totally clear, but a great deal of possession and ownership is voiced about it. Delicious, I've really been hoping for some soul-bond stuff. There's some further implication that summoning males from other dimensions as war grooms is common, another fantastic idea I've been thinking we've lacked.
Starlight shows up to make some lewd comments about the main character, Twilight does some mate guarding, invades his personal space for some lewd nuzzling, makes it clear she owns him, all very good. Finally, she changes his name and then gives him a room next to hers with a connecting door. Best of all, he dislikes all of this.
I'm anxious about him being an alicorn. Obviously stallicorns violate something sacred about the show in general, but moreover setting up a future equalization in power between them is a huge red flag that this story may culminate in some gay, historically bankrupt re-litigation of a gender war rebellion or whatever. Likewise if the course of his resistance to Twilight becomes, in a narrative sense, more about humiliating her than about failure then I'll probably stop reading.
Otherwise, the author's writing is passable, although frequent grammatical issues in the comment replies make me concerned. He has a knack for that kind of terrible dramatic comparison that only someone truly lacking in imagination can accomplish, and an urgency about making said comparisons for every single thing he describes.
>"Those eyes—impossibly blue, like the sky had given him a piece of itself and told him to go cause problems—drifted down to the street."
I spit.
Will monitor this one.
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