Tarzan's art is just incredible

>>7639163
Good attempt. You made a great effort to retain the negative shapes. One thing I think is holding you back is the lack of overlapping shapes and lines.

>>7639168
nice concept

>>7639185
You will solve things much faster if you look at other people's art and see how they approached it. The boorus are an incredible resource.

>>7639284
really good

>>7639407
You rushed it to the rendering stage. There are too many things that could use a bit more time to mature. There's no sense of gravity (quash), the her left leg feels disjointed and so on. That said, there is an idea I like it. One more thing,conceptually I don't think the ahoge makes sense in this context.

>>7639628
>>7639641
the values are hard to read, try adding the lightest values to the face.

>>7639668
good work

>>7638808
>>7638818
An effective critique request comes with a clear goal statement in mind.
>people didn't even realize my construction studies were all wide angle and intentionally distorted
That’s actually a sign of poor communication on your part. You're failing to clearly abstract and express your intent artistically.
If you're aiming for "fine art" and exaggerated anatomy, Jenny Saville is probably one of the best references. Her work is brutal and grotesque, with incredibly vivid colors.