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>My plan is Goro resolves the megaton bomb while Seija's keeps Yukari distracted, but it's taxing for the both of them since they've also been through a lot today and eventually they're at Yukari's mercy at which point I was going to baton pass to you
Rather than stopping the bomb, and since the duo are separated in their efforts, Goro could put his teachings to par and lift a barrier that holds it. Should achieve similar results, and open space for an interaction I have in mind with other characters. All else is fine, thanks for the planning~!
>This is all operating on 'fight time' btw, so the way I see it less then a minute has passed.
30 seconds since your first Yukari chapter seems ideal with the little talk and fight time, and if you could write the rest of things so it takes at maximum another 30 seconds it'd be great. Reimu is on a clock and I cannot explain in-universe why she'd spend longer than 1/18 of her remaining time not trying to split Yukari's head open.
I'll be writing a plug chapter tomorrow to cover the time between your first two chapters, to give context on why everyone hasn't jumped Yukari yet, good writing for you man! We're getting there!