>>24547679
That's a very good thing anon and I will tell you why.

Imagine you paint a picture and show it to Rembrandt and he says "you didn't get the light right on the guy's hand".

That sort of implies you basically got everything else more or less right. If everything had been terrible, Rembrandt would not have picked out that one thing. He would have said, hahahahaha..

So here's what your publishing agent is really saying:

THIS BOOK IS GOOD. POSSIBLY EVEN GREAT. BUT IT'S NOT YET SPREADING ITS WINGS FOR FLIGHT AND THAT IS BECAUSE OF THIS ONE SMALL FLAW WHICH YOU CAN EASILY FIX.