>>7619758
Great work, anon. This pose is incredibly difficult. I feel that gesture and empathy are your greatest weaknesses. The pose doesn’t feel powerful or combative. It feels more sickly and like someone about to cough. When you're in a guard position, you’re never loose. In fact, you're fighting the urge to drop your guard. Bas Rutten is a great reference for understanding what to watch out in fighting poses. By the way, I love the face, it reminds me of The Legend of the Strongest, Kurosawa! Do it again next time. It’s going to be easier and better.

>>7619811
incredible aura, it feels like a shittier version of the thug looney tunes shirts I kinda like it.

>>7619918
cool work anon