>>7634628
No, it's not that I don't want to help you. The issue is that there is not a guaranteed formula to tackle stylization and/or appeal.
I can only repeat what I said in this thread already. Look at artistst you like and try to copy their habits/style. Try to memorize what they do when they draw the faces you like so much. Where they put the mouths in different povs and perspectives, where they put the eyes, how they draw the nose from different angles, etc.
I personally don't like this approach, because I think trying and failing at it on my own is the only way in order for me to develop a style that is not just a copy of somebody else's. I personally spent years "just drawing" in order to find out which mistakes I made in the end looked good. With trial and error I realized which stylistic choices I should drop and which ones I should keep.
I honestly don't know if this is the best or quickest method, but it's the method that worked for me. I'm still experimenting whenever I draw, so I'm still developing a style I could really call consistent.
Pic attached is a drawing of mine that showcases something I like in terms of style. Just so you can get a better idea of how I draw.

You can post your art and I can give you my personal opinion on what things you should change. Heck, I can even do a redline.
But the underlying issue is that that's just gonna be my personal opinion, because I have my own personal sensibilities and sense of appeal.
You might want a completely different result.
Does any of this make sense to you?