>>7605594
forms are looking good again, very clear. One easy to fix mistake I notice about your hatching is that you strictly use straight lines, which flattens the the drawing out. This is absolutely not necessary. Follow the contour when drawing hatching lines, this way you simultaneously show form and value. Pic related, I applied some curved hatching on the fish but it's hard to see so I did it again on the organic form

I also seem to notice you're pressing down hard on the paper, but that might not be the case. Anyhow, avoid tensing up in general.

Your forms are very clean and clear though, better than mine. Did you do Scott Robertson before this?