hi im >>7643266 sorry for getting back just now, but I really appreciate all the feedback. Thanks! Even if i feal like a bot writing like this, Sorry for any mistakes, English is not my first language.

>>7643421
You're absolutely right — the knee positioning does look off, and I can see how it makes the pose feel unnatural. I'll definitely try acting it out myself to get a better sense of the weight and balance, even if poses like this can be a bit embarrassing! As for the head, I was aiming for a style with slightly bigger heads, but maybe it just ends up looking weird here.

>>7644291
Thank you! Though I have to ask… what exactly is bloggu?

>>7644824
Absolutely. Just gotta upgrade the shrimp brain i’ll simply shrimprove.

>>7645416
You totally captured what I was going for, but with a much more natural and relaxed pose. I can really see how the changes to the hips and feet make a big difference. And yeah, the hands were actually meant to give exactly the kind of vibe you nailed with yours, so great job on that! No worries at all about critiquing me, even harshly if you want — I really appreciate the feedback.


in any case today I tried drawing something a bit more goonerbait, but it really didn’t turn out well. It just doesn’t give off that sexy vibe I was aiming for, and honestly… I’m really bad with colors. Back to the grind, I guess even if is midnight.