>>7656682
face: just move the features around a bit and try to avoid that many black lines in a render on the mouth/nose

the shoulder on the right: upper arm is too fat lower arm is too skinny, in this position the brachioradialis is especially thick and usually covers up alot more area especially when foreshortened.

lower torso/legs: a bit too small the proportions didn't make sense

sick renderskills though on the chest unironically mogs me into oblivion