https://vocaroo.com/1npXUdqbaeR7

im gonna keep posting this one till it's done, it's almost there i think but i'd love any thoughts and critiques y'all might have. it's been kicking my ass for months now.

anyhow:
>>126749571 i think my main gripe here is your delivery, especially in the first half or so. you're sitting in a weird spot between laid back and focused, which isn't working. lean into one side more and you'll be looking good

>>126752813 i like this version, i do agree that something needs to be brought forward, overall we're a lil too washed out. love the track tho

>>126755062 the chops are v nice. but it's a lil scarce. i'd love to hear some sort of main idea punch thru

>>126755157 guitar tone is super nice