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6/12/2025, 6:32:12 PM
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The obliques are wrong, too short, they are getting squished down too much, which by itself isn't really a bad thing, but you aren't conveying the gesture necessary for that level of squishing which means it was most likely a mistake, the gesture of the obliques itself, that is, the flow that they take on as they go up the body is also incorrect in the drawing.
I took the screenshot wrong, I should have included a little more of the picture (upwards) but another problem is how the ribcage interacts with the rectus abdominis.
During the timeline you corrected picrelated of the overlapping, but I think that you still failed to convey the correct interaction of the rectus abdominis and the obliques.
From what I can see, from the timeline, and I've gathered from your other drawings, you probably have a vague understanding of the underlying anatomy, but you still don't understand how the things interact properly, their proportions, and how to convey them, which is why I believe you would benefit greatly from some courses.
Don't know whether it's from the reference you use, or things you've gathered from drawing the figure so many time, but you kinda understand "X thing should be here", but you end up representing it wrong, in this case, and as I've continued to reference, how you ended up drawing the obliques and the ribcage ended making the character look bloated/pregnant, but likely more importantly, asymmetrical.
The breast, and their interaction with the figure, who has their arms up, also presents another issue, as they aren't following the correct path that they should. The pectoralis major ends up connecting to the arm/end of the shoulder, so when someone raises their arms the breasts move in a certain way. You kinda illustrated it in the farthest arm (from our POV), but failed completely to do so in the closest breast/arm, which makes her breasts look slapped on top of the figure/fake.
The obliques are wrong, too short, they are getting squished down too much, which by itself isn't really a bad thing, but you aren't conveying the gesture necessary for that level of squishing which means it was most likely a mistake, the gesture of the obliques itself, that is, the flow that they take on as they go up the body is also incorrect in the drawing.
I took the screenshot wrong, I should have included a little more of the picture (upwards) but another problem is how the ribcage interacts with the rectus abdominis.
During the timeline you corrected picrelated of the overlapping, but I think that you still failed to convey the correct interaction of the rectus abdominis and the obliques.
From what I can see, from the timeline, and I've gathered from your other drawings, you probably have a vague understanding of the underlying anatomy, but you still don't understand how the things interact properly, their proportions, and how to convey them, which is why I believe you would benefit greatly from some courses.
Don't know whether it's from the reference you use, or things you've gathered from drawing the figure so many time, but you kinda understand "X thing should be here", but you end up representing it wrong, in this case, and as I've continued to reference, how you ended up drawing the obliques and the ribcage ended making the character look bloated/pregnant, but likely more importantly, asymmetrical.
The breast, and their interaction with the figure, who has their arms up, also presents another issue, as they aren't following the correct path that they should. The pectoralis major ends up connecting to the arm/end of the shoulder, so when someone raises their arms the breasts move in a certain way. You kinda illustrated it in the farthest arm (from our POV), but failed completely to do so in the closest breast/arm, which makes her breasts look slapped on top of the figure/fake.
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