>>7701723
the difference was I forgot a dash on one of the petals on the shield and it was heavily bothering me
and I agree the neck does look a touch too long and maybe the head is a touch too small
>pauldron
good observation, I didn't catch that but now that you've said it I definitely see it
here's the ref for reference
your drawing looks good though, not that I'm one who should be giving advice or criticism