how does this page look? Its meant to be an establishing shot of this underwater vault the governments thrown a bunch of non dangerous mystical item, and journalists/ detectives who got close to uncovering the conspiracy around the main plot, for record keeping purposes.

I've been picking away at this while doing other pages, trying to think of weird shit to add. When I scan it in to add tones, I might remove some of the lamer stuff like the coffin and chuck in a sarcophagus, as well as try to fix some of the lineweight issues.

Anybody got any cool ideas/ stuff from your own comic, thatd fit here? weirder the better

>>7756860
Thanks alot for the critique, definitely gotta get better at drawing people, Im doing a fair few studies of characters and poses so that should help. The designs for my main characters aren’t interesting, and while that was sorta purposeful, as there quickly gonna change alot, I made them too uninteesting, and I might go back to add some flair to them.

At least though Im gonna be able to change them alot as the story goes on, as the streamer girls basically gonna become a zombie, her manager is gonna get a very injured, and the fat waitress girl is gonna be turned into an amazonian like model, so I can look at redesigning them accordingly when these events happen soon