I put them side by side to make it easier
>>7687744
>jaw too long
Do you mean the whole jaw, the part of the jaw that's jutting out past the mouth, or both? The jaw jutting out past the mouth I doesn't seem wrong to me since mine ended up looking slanted upwards instead of the original's slant downwards, so it makes sense maybe, but I definitely see that the line of the entire jaw is way longer in mine, so I get that one
>neck too thick
I don't see it sorry, could you give me some pointers?
>neck to shoulder angle
Also having trouble with this one, could you explain a bit? Sorry, I swear I'm not trying to be defensive, I just literally don't see what you mean and want to understand so I can improve.
>solid tho!
Thanks anon
>>7687754
Thank you so much anon, this is very helpful!
>nose
I get it now, but I thought you might enjoy knowing that it took me like 5 minutes to understand what you wrote there. I thought it said "Make betoge flat for this umole (cooler)", and I was frantically looking these words up thinking they were art/manga terms I was unfamiliar with. I ended up on some dutch dictionary before realizing betoge = bridge and umole = angle, I'm just blind lol
>optional lines
Does this run the risk of making the character look old or something? I feel like every time I add them when trying to draw a face, I make them look aged.
>neck slimmer
I see now what the other anon meant; how do you guys spot this so immediately? If you had held a gun to my head and asked me if the neck on mine was thicker or thinner than the model, I'd probably die saying they were the same
>everything else
Thanks anon, I don't have questions about any of the other pieces of advice
>kubo
Since you're also a fan, can you take a look at the link and recommend one for me to draw? Of course I can just pick any, but it'd be nice to get a suggestion from a more experienced artist who's also a fan.