>>535459051
>>535442991
yeah I just finished writing a 125k word book. Toby isn't a bad writer, he just lacks focus and wants to fencesit all the fucking time. some people are just crap, some choices aren't ideal and sometimes it's not the time to fucking joke. He also has the inexperienced/new writer quirk of not knowing pacing at fucking all. board 3 was cut form chapter 3 ''cuz it's too long'' I don't think it would be too long at all?.... People complain chapter 3 is too light on lore/story progression, and while I personally don't mind the detour I can see why people feel that way.

>>535459484
thanks, made me chuckle.