>turned out to be such a long story

NO SHIT it will turn out like that when you wrote the needle scene in chapter 1 with 19 minutes of text after saying it's a needle in the first 5 seconds of it and then went for the rest of the time describing it and writing needle prose trying to make the needle sound like it was the answer to nuclear waste and how to fix the Ozone layer being penetrated and how you can fix world war problems with your needle go eat a needle R07!!!!!!