This was the first chapter I'd actually call good. What an enormous difference it makes to visually look at a coherent narrative from the game instead of constant "do you member cool thing that happened", "yeah bro, shit was cash", and maybe one panel of faceless protagonist machino.
The dialog also feels like something machino would say, so maybe the harem didn't collectively fall in love with fake scripted VN lines after all. I guess the game has chatgpt inside, or was magic bullshit to begin with.