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Ok, just finished changing things based off of the comments, a chunk of them are small changes so won't repost all the pages (unless you really want me)
This was the main page I did a bit more on, other than waiting for TL anon for last few SFX and to hand him the pages we're getting close to wrapping up.

Stuff I'm still unsure about:
What I wrote about here >>281345167
and here first part >>281345478