First time poster here.
I've got myself a harebrained idea and close to 20,000 words from the forever soup of my brain. I'm almost up to a comfortable stockpile, and all it needs now is a cover.

>Mamet's Full Metal Panic(no mechs,"""realistic""")+Lovecraft+The World God Only Knows
Is that sloptastic or what?

I've read the guide in OP, but I'm curious to know whether this is horrible or not to other people's eyes.
This is the short of Act One.
https://litter.catbox.moe/wo9qf840j0sg4szw.pdf
R8, H8, Masturbate, thanks!