>>1539116
>>1539117
Holy kino.
Back in my day they used to send an MTF to shoot warpers for breathin' wrong. This guy's a fuckin' menace, someone should tell the jumpchainers.
>>1539119
I think it segways fine, you established the background and then set-up the main character, it's a perfectly good opener.
If you need to call back to the start depending on what it is you don't have to change anything here, you can just remind the audience later about any information you've already presented.
You can add foreshadowing at the start but I think the opening's fine as it is, unless it's necessary.