joining in for the funsies, here's my interpretation of the catgirl in question

ik OP's art is from pixiv, but if it were someone looking for advice, the illustration is actually not bad. the coloring is appealing, and an effort for some kind of background was made, so i'd call it a win. at that point you just grind fundies and apply them to whatever you like drawing and you will naturally improve.
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for the record, your anatomy is good, but that's about all you have going for you in this drawing. knowing where to put all of the fancy lines to indicate fat and body structure isn't going to distract people from the muddy colors and shading, unappealing face, or the tumblr nose. it's giving 'i just learned anatomy, but have no idea how to stylize it'. nevermind how obnoxious you were with your critique -- which is funny given how badly you reacted to the negative feedback kek