Rin Anon, If you are around I require your input:
Would she try and keep Alyona's idea of an expanded smuggling ring going with the supply she has left with her as the boss? Or scale back and focus on following Itsuro's orders?

Would she hold a grudge against Alyona? Or try and sell the info she has on her residence and lifestyle?
>>96863462
Sumi looks as dangerous as she is.
I don't have any notes other than keep writing. Your shit is good.
Alyona is too busy to be at rich people's parties, but she does know how to dance. Parties like this remind her why communism is the best and why capitalism sucks.
>>96863479
I can Imagine each faction with Sonic Heroes style system where they fill the same roll but with different details.

>>96718962
Nice work!
The way she talks to her Idolon is interesting. I don't think anyone's given their as much personality or legacy. The idea other users came before her is really cool. Are the former users still alive or does the spirit pass after the last users death?

Its nice to see Ai get a friend who can watch out for her. Excited to see how she deals with some of the other bad apples of Higan.
>>96719296
MHA more like MHGAY
Naruto more like Narutarded

>>96484398
If you'd like a bit more stakes, maybe have Alyona ask him to re-gather them because she noticed equipment maintenance and acquisition fees don't line up and having it lead back to Reiji "charitably donating" to clubs on the outs with the Census club.