>>7697692
Yodelling: Speedrun/Eli

Now this, this is what I call a Redemption Arc.

Ririna's entry was intially the one I was (in a morbidly curiosity type of way) anticipating in this round, but sadly it felt like the shock has left and all I have is a okay story, good art, but otherwise, nothing I wanna come back to, Speedrun's entry on the other hand, is just a solid entry all around, the story is more tight-knit, yet it a good amount of gags to spice up the yodelling showdown, also Bakutsu gets killed, kino entry, massive upgrade over the first one.

Kastenlauf: Toabyak

Speaking of which, oh Toabyak, what a unfortunate situation you've been put in, your opponent dropping out mid-match for other priorities whose to the average person should notice that is an idiotic move for the most part, making all the efforts of the former wasted, I don't wanna come off as harsh as is apparent he's not doing well atm...

But Shirley's comic is better overall, as it tells a more cohesive entry that doesn't wallow in what it lost, but that's the advantange that a replacement would have by default, that's the catch, so to be honest, I'm just gonna throw Toby a bone for pity, hope the 3rd round his luck gets better. Just don't wallow too much over what you lost, instead try to make the best out a bad situation like I did with my entry, even if its something more simple.


Chocolate House: Melody

Oh boy, this one's a doozy, I like Gretchen's entry, the whole cooking show plot is nice, the coloring's as Gucci as last round, and the ending's cute and sweet, also Atta pulling that face's memeworthy already, but I like Melody's story even more, the whole narrative about self-worth and and the way Melody checks her objectives without betraying herself is just Gucci, also Adel gets pwned by a rock, Wizard of Oz-style, Kino entry, 10/10.