I posted an opening excerpt a few days ago, but here's the completed opening. It's a meta-subplot inside a larger story. I won't explain too much about the in context, but as for the story at large, just that the guy writing it is struggling with porn addiction, and he's picked up this little girl (who's going to help him get over it eventually). Anyway, he's trying to write a comic book after a long hiatus.

I said before, and I'll say again, it's pretty experimental, so let me know what you think. Deffo not my usual style. Let me know what you think!

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