>>7701746
>>7701752
>>7701756
I don't usually redline but here's an issue I might actually be able to solve.
I felt the placement of the head was wrong. Not off by far but still noticeable.
If we're going by the measurements in the graph there (you can have the full tutorial if you want) the ribcage is 1,5 heads tall.
I divided your ribcage into thirds, giving me the size the head should be. Then I created a basic Loomis head.
So much for the head.
Two things about the face: First, the big gap between the nose and the mouth. Bring the eyes and nose down.
Secondly, the jawline is too similar to the 'shoulder-line'. This makes the drawing flatter. Fix this by drawing a different angle.
Enough critique. I really like how you did the torso and arms and your lines are clean. I hope you finish this.