>>7685186
Unlike that other anon, I will provide you with actual help and a redline to boot since that other person was too busy sucking themselves off to provide you with a critique that matches your art style. For one, as the other anon said, your work lacks a proper understanding of anatomy. For instance, the hand is way too flat and lacks construction; this is a result of your lack of understanding of form. You are smart enough to know that legs in front of the body go in front of the body, however, you don't know how those basic shapes fall in perspective so I would recommend learning perspective and drawing the body parts in perspective, kinda like how I drew the breasts. Second, I notice your head is a little misshapen. Unironically, I recommend Loomis so you can learn to construct skulls and maybe one day you will be able to draw like me.
Best of luck anon, and I hope this was helpful.