>>7693461
Super cute! From what i see she dosen't look at cake. Her nose position indicate that face is slightly up so you should not see so much top head volume.
Mouth should go a bit higher and iris should be little diagonal towards cake sience it's close to her. Blush is not directly under eye but more on a side.
I reccomend drawing heads in some extreme angles and see how face features overlap each other. Also perspective studies help alot.