>>939052042

I'd like your honest opinion.

this is an unfinished demo track without the vocals or the 3 verses

it's called PLAYIN' WITH FIRE
and I have 3 sections written
each of them is about a different person
fucking up their life in different ways

-the girl that's fucking niggers
-a cheating lying diplicitous husband
-a woman who ends up running up heroin in motel rooms with used needles & hep c junkies

but the CHORUS is the real hook
(again, the vocals aren't on it yet)

but the chorus melody is the same as the chorus vocals, and it goes:

"I really think so.. you ought to know.. you know that you're playin' with fire! "

(by the way- I was tweaking when I sequenced this basic demo track, and I added a stupid "let's go let's play let's seize this day" thing because I had just met my wife and we were literally playing like children going to other cities and meeting people and exploring life- but disregard the 'lets go let's play' because THE SONG IS ABOUT PEOPLE DESTROYING THEIR LIVES)

opinion from YOU is highly respected

PLAYIN' WITH FIRE™
https://voca.ro/1jqaoAHr16j3