>>58210827
>>58210840
>>58210853
A fun start! Thanks for writing and I hope you keep going.

>>58211071
>>58211216
3 in the morning?
Words in my head or no, I'd have let that one slide. Good for him.

>>58210898
Your story being entertaining is most important. Doesn't matter if it takes place on Day 1 or Day 1000, so long as it's fun.

>>58211567
Pesky.