>>461664
Biggest issue is that the text spacing is *way* too crowded and that makes it look amateurish and the exact opposite of a luxury brand. Get that part right before anything else, lose all the drop shadows that have little impact on such a dark green background, and work from there to develop it into a badge leaving lots of room that says " I don't have to be stingy and cram everything together, I'm a luxury brand and can do whatever I want".

Picrel isn't perfect or the same typeface but it's far more like how luxury car brands are expected to look than what you've done.