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Anonymous No.536927326
I honestly wish I knew what "bad writing" was. I usually just turn down my brain for most stories, as I want to have a good time with the time I had.

Regarding Sonic stories, I wish you describe me what are bad habits in Sonic stories.

I'll share mine, from fics:
>Using Chaos as a sustitute for God in casual speech
Chaos is not Arceus, he is not a god of a religion in-universe.
From the comics and games
>References in dialogue
Its cute when its done for punny purposes, but in the case of Flynn - to put an example - they fill like padding. It's like the script said "Insert dialogue here" and the writer just inserted a reference because it was easier.

Some Spider-man comics do this with Mary Jane saying "face it tiger, you just hit the jackspot". It's not cute, it's boring.

It's why I feel Mephiles has the worst fight in Shadow Gens - Biolizard and Metal Sonic got new dialogue to show their personality or how Shadow feels about them. Memphis? He just repeats his dialogue from 06.

What are your thoughts?
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Anonymous No.536390134
>>536389537
>Yeah but that's basically what every other character does.
No, they don't. We meme about Whisper and Surge being crying lesbians, especially Whisper who many major moments is her breaking apart for the drama.

But they have more going for. Belle was mostly crying about her daddy issues, how people disliked her for being an eggman robot, or how no matte what she tries she cannot change Eggman back to Mr Tinker.

>>536389582
Lighting in a bottle for Eggman.

>>536389829
Not all of them. When Nite and Don were revealed as gay, many people were critical because of the way Evan wrote them didn't suggest they were a couple but an employee and his boss.