>>58144497
>A case of writing what we know, perhaps?
Nah, I picked Cops because it was the first show I could think of that just ran on and on for hours. If I were writing what I knew he'd be watching the Simpsons
>In any case, I see he's focusing more on developing his catness rather than his Pokemonness. [...] Ben might have to try being a little bit more adventurous eventually, especially if he wants to eat properly.
Damn, you just predicted all of Part 3. He'll get a chance to develop his Pokemonness soon, Litten just has a much more limited skillset than something like Zoroark or Salazzle so there's only so much I have to work with.
>>58145283
Yeah, I needed to make it more obvious he was in denial about the situation, not just oblivious to it. Deep down he knows it's bad and could get worse, he just doesn't want to acknowledge it.
He actually doesn't smoke, he's just scruffy looking and mellow so everyone assumes he does. This is me writing what I know.
Incineroar is one of the few Pokemon that get five whole fingers, too. That would be an important goal to work towards if this weren't obviously going to fix itself in a few days with no effort needed on his part.
Thank you guys for reading it!
>>58148156
Speaking of denial...