>>7685225
Pose issue, and lines need to be reworked, all the shapes need to be of confidence. You are already using stablizer, so you should be able to make sure the lines are good, if not disable it all together.
>>7685457
Ugly shapes, over complicated, unsatisfying, not pleasing, learn to simplify. Both of you can look at my cat girl, just a sketch painting but easy to understand shapes and lines. Flat yet shows form.