>>7705060
Took a stab at this. I know my art style is quite different than yours, and you probably want her to have proportions that are closer to what you have in your drawing, however, I noticed that your limbs are very skinny as if the clothes are on top of wooden cylinders rather than squishy fatty flesh.

I also do not believe that the foreshortening that you did here was on purpose. I believe that the drawing becoming smaller near the feet is probably because you drew from the head down as you sketched rather than trying to map out the proportions as whole when doing the pose sketch.