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The pacing being messed with definitely screwed over the first chapter most. I think it only got better after that even if it's still being rushed, outside a decision to move a certain important scene to Otherworld which I didn't like. I personally like the manga most when it deviates slightly, or even adds it own details to make the experience a little different. The church scene couldn't effectively replicate what happens in the game, so it plays out a little differently. Or us getting an added scene with Miss Candice or Kel being more active in wanting to set things right. Or adding that after Sunny almost drowned, the first thing he did after opening his eyes and coming to was to try and wipe Mari's tears. It's a sad and adorable detail that helps show how much they meant to each other. 'He loved her and he killed her' and all that.
I also like the art. I don't have any technical judgments or whatever, I just think it looks neat. And pretty, like chapter 2's walk through Basil's garden. The characters look really cute overall.