>>7660193
I'm very bad with shading as you can see on my original image. I don't know why lol, I just get scared to overshade and it look weird. I get this same thing over and over, "You don't have to be scared of shading", but I still am even after months and months of drawing.
I tried to follow what you did with your edit and it really, really looks a looot better, but I don't think i'd be able to apply this myself without someone else pointing it out for me. Thanks anyway! I'll finally get to work on the background.