>>7689779
My point is your value distillation is inconsistent but don't worry it just comes with more practice. If you're following the video's 2-value study then if you show the shadow of the midsection you should also show the values of the frills, shadow under arm, eyes, etc. because they're all equal or darker than it. Show and imply form with value and negative shapes. If the drawing is bad then fix it, it's 2 values, simple to adjust. Blot out large sections and redo if you have to.