>>7765443
I like the chained weapon panels, I think they're the priority of the page, I'd go as far as breaking some of the panel structure and just let old hag catching the chain bleed a little bit more onto the others, a simple example would be putting her breasts on top of the panel below, but if you don't want the "pervy" way I'd give more breathing room for her upper torso, I don't like the motion of the right arm on the elbow area being cropped by the other panel below, it interferes with the action and it's a bit distracting.

Anyways here's an example of something that could work with your scene, just crop some of it to fit your page, also there's room to play with the action lines, it's a good contrast to the "stillness" of the other panels.