>>7616079
seems like you're trying to draw the upper torso facing a bit left, but the center line for the neck is messing it up. Also the pec/top of booba should follow the shoulders for this pose.
The thighs look a bit weird since the widest part of them isn't at the groin.

It's a pretty good effort though, and your rendering is cool. Keep it up bro

Tried to cel-shade but the latex pants confused my brain so I resorted to oonga bonga in the end.
How do they make cel-shade look so easy bro.
Critique and advice much appreciated.