>>58221276
I've gotta let them know about this!
Poor SuperMachoHouse. At least once he gets it under control he's got a superhuman physique to look forward to.
>>58221366
From the start I wanted this to be a story about survival, but I worry sometimes I'm veering too close to misery porn with poor Ben. I'm glad you still like reading it.
>one hopes he may find a way to take proper control over the "zone" and not have to resort to this clearly flawed instinctual auto-pilot he's been relying on.
I promise this is gonna happen but it's gonna take a little bit longer.
>werewolf-like atavism
I'm thinking the zone less like him going feral and more like him going Pokemon. Letting the parts of his mind that make Machamp think he always had four arms or Lucario think he had a pack take over (or the part of Derek that just let him fly). Maybe I should make that part of him more talkative.
>>58223167
Noivern sleeping upside down from an exercise bar is a funny image.