since we're here there are some really good things about E33 like art direction and music but the writing is a recovered abortion, and it struck me why recently. Its all observational: character walk into a room, "there is a thing in this room", they see a big enemy "wow a fucking big enemy" I would never laud a Hazbin accusation at the game but it feels like it leans that way sometimes when really uncalled for. None of the characters react realistically to their situation, especially the intro when everyone dies and they're just celebrating, not to mention the NPC dialogue feels straight up AI generated. Anyway I'm preaching to the choir here, you all know they got her off some reddit forum or whatever but additionally to that I'm positive she lacks an internal monologue.
tl;dr its all tell don't show.