Sigh... Some people just can't appreciate true clownery. My only regrets are making Atta to manic and that ending text saying "Atta never poisoned anyone again." I've changed it to be more vague but implications are still there I guess.

>>7698954
>Berry's last entry was funny for her portrayal of the Investigator. Now it's only her.
You know there's like 7 other characters in my entry right? Not just Berry?
>I don't understand why turning her into a clown would override the poison.
You might've missed some context, that bite had clown venom from Fluxxo's daughter Shits. I thought the clown bite and the transformation was clear.

>>7699493
>has a glowing LED piercing above it
Interesting

>>7700154
>It is a little sad not to see more of plain Berry explored, since I assume the clown status is permanent.
She'll be back to normal after this round but it isn't gone. It's more like a Jekyll and Hyde situation. DW I'll try to get more of normal Berry explored.
>The first portion is a bit slow and awkward, and didn't really engage me.
I tried having a more slow burn opening but I'll admit I didn't nail the execution. I thought the gif pages could carry it but oh well.
>Felt pretty reliant on the clown twist.
It was a major gambit for me, I had so many doubts for clown Berry but Atta was such a stressful opponent for me I had to take the risk.
Also I can't stop staring at the way you drew Berry in your Entry. Love it.

If y'all want more thoughts then read this google doc. Already posted in the NG thread so these votes count.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/17OdpQWSabOjA6jXbLmlWvrelPe6_wsoPV4TQHRsA154/edit?tab=t.0