edit #52. original from >>>/vt/vtai:
https://archive.palanq.win/vt/thread/91980578/#91999025

>>11370318
desu i'm kind of a hypocrite saying this, cause if i were to somehow ever do long-form content idk if i'd do the following, but i think since each page has a border, you could afford to put a page number on each page, without concern for it breaking immersion. otherwise there's a lot of stuff i can't comment on since i don't add any bells or whistles to any captions i do, and i can't comment on panelling, sound effects, using different fonts; anything. but i think the vertical spacing in the fonts you use might be super bad. mind you, the one (1) font i use is not much better, and i didn't change it at all. but still. an anon posted an image with some standardized fonts they recommended >>11361958, if it'd help. maybe depending on the program you use to edit you can change the vertical spacing regardless, but still

also, the first page featuring a hand gesture when she has six fingers (and even her thumb looks kinda bad) is super noticeable, considering it is the centrepiece of the page